Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 9, 2008, 5:12 am

You wrote Notes on the wind And sent them on to me, But I did not understand; then You wrote. Words in the sand But they were washed away Ere I had time to read them; but You wrote Words on my heart...

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 9, 2008, 8:22 am

wow! Maryse this is very touching...superb write...Hugs, Peg

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 9, 2008, 10:36 am

This is the third time I've read it tonight and I don't regret one microsecond. Absolutely lovely write Maryse.

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 9, 2008, 10:55 pm

Thank you Peggy... glad you enjoyed. Regards, Maryse

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 9, 2008, 10:58 pm

Thank you Terry...was trying for a swirl! Regards, Maryse

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 10, 2008, 12:51 am

Dear Maryse, Wow! Lady! This is Gorgeous! Lorraine

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 10, 2008, 1:21 am

Perfect words to share with ones Valentine.

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 10, 2008, 1:49 am

Thank you so much Lorraine! Regards, Maryse

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 10, 2008, 1:51 am

Thank you Nia... though it's a bit late for me to send these to him. Regards, Maryse

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 13, 2008, 6:44 am

This would make a lovely swirl Maryse You wrote Notes on the wind And sent them on to me, But I did not understand what You wrote Words in the sand But they were washed away Ere I had time to read all...

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 14, 2008, 3:20 am

My bad Terry... I wanted a swirl but realise I was using the 2 syllable line too frequently. Changed it just a bit so that it reads more smoothly. How's this ... You wrote Notes on the wind And sent...

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Re: Written Words ... Cinquain and Theme Challenges ... Rewrite

February 14, 2008, 3:35 am

Maryse, you have done an excellent revise, and the line "But I did not understand; then" I believe the word of then makes this write even more outstanding...this will look great in Ts...

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